Wow Brandon, what an excellent poem! I particularly liked the way you used jumping on the trampoline and flying like a bird. I can see how there could be lots of similarities between the way they are described. - Mrs Lashlie.
I have come back to read your poem again... the photo you have added really matches your wonderful description. You really followed the success criteria to achieve a memorable poem.
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Wow Brandon, what an excellent poem! I particularly liked the way you used jumping on the trampoline and flying like a bird. I can see how there could be lots of similarities between the way they are described.
- Mrs Lashlie.
I have come back to read your poem again... the photo you have added really matches your wonderful description. You really followed the success criteria to achieve a memorable poem.
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